Hi everyone,
I’ve read everyone’s concern about the use of “it” in the first chapter and will be reverting the description to “they” and “them”. Again, please note that I did not mean in any way to use it as a means of demeaning Jill. It was just a hard choice trying to figure the right use of the word. There are a lot of articles online with choices ranging from “they”, “he” and “it”.
Please note that I’ll be making the changes next week as I’ll have more time to go through each individual part to comb for the mistakes.
My sincerest apologies.
My sincerest apologies.